Elevators and charts and Friday, oh my!


While I was researching elevators, I ran across this account from a guy who was trapped in an elevator. If this is one of your fears (Joyce, I'm talking to you), maybe this guy's hilarious account will help you rethink your dread--if dread is a thing that can be reasoned through. In any case, the guy is a good writer and his story is entertaining.

http://masthead.blogspot.com/2005/02/in-which-i-am-trapped.html

Yesterday I updated my Excel chart for THE ELEVATOR, the WIP. The Excel chart functions as a timeline for my editor when the work is finished, but it also helps me see the entire novel at a glance as I'm writing it. I color code the rows according to POV, and the columns (chapter, POV, date/time, place, action, weather, etc) help me keep track of details at a glance.

In any case, now that I am nearing the end, I have reached the ENDING, which I usually don't really know until I get there. I mean, I have an idea of the final scene and I know who survives and who doesn't, but how to get there is the big question.

So--today I am pressing on toward the end, aided by my handy dandy Excel chart.

Happy Friday!

Angie
By Angela on Friday, December 30, 2005 @ 10:05 AM


for this post

 
Blogger Dianne Says:

That is hilarious! Yep, I'm slightly claustrophobic so being stuck in an elevator would kind of freak me out. Someone thought it was funny to lock me in a utility closet in college late one night; they regretted it once they heard my panicked screams! I hope your characters are not like me!

 

Add a Comment



Elevators


I've been thinking a lot about elevators--about how far you could fall and survive a tumble down an elevator shaft (pretty far, apparently--google "elevator shaft" and "survive" and you'll find some pretty amazing stories) and especially how you would, um, relieve yourself if you had to be trapped in an elevator for hours--

Anyway, I thought this might be an interesting question to pose. If you had the foresight to prepare for being trapped in an elevator, what three things would you take into the elevator with you? (The problem, of course, is that no one ever knows when they're going to be stuck, so I doubt anyone is ever adequately prepared.)

Still . . . inquiring minds want to know. What three things would you take with you into an elevator that's less-than-reliable? (P.S. Cell phones are less-than-reliable in elevators).

Angie
By Angela on Thursday, December 29, 2005 @ 8:24 AM


for this post

 
Blogger Carrie Says:

A really good (long) book, a bottle of water, and a box of protein bars. Of course, this is if I had the foresight that I was going to be stuck. If I ever did get stuck with what I usually carry in my purse, I could play Hot Wheels or Polly Pockets, sanitize my hands, and wipe my nose, and that's about it!

 
 
Blogger Angela Says:

Maybe that would have been a better question--with what you usually have with you, what could you do in an elevator?

I could cover the walls with post it notes . . . and sanitize all the buttons on the panel. :-)

Angie

 
 
Blogger Accidental Poet Says:

I'd have something to read and a bottle of water. And a cellphone to play games on :)

What do I usually have? Just the cellphone. and it DOES have a game on it ...And a whole bunch of scrap paper that I could scribble poetry on ...there's usually candy that my kids have gotten after a restaurant meal that I have appropriated for them to have "later" ...I also carry around a game called Pass the Pigs, no matter how small my purse is, because it keeps my kids happy in restaurants. Along those lines, I usually also have a keychain that has a boggle game on it. I used to have one that had a Scrabble game on it but Scrabble's not so much a solitaire game.

 
 
Blogger C.J. Darlington Says:

I usually have a swiss army pocketknife which has a saw, two blades, awl, can opener, screwdriver, scissors, and a fishhook remover. Most days I also have a small flashlight that can fit in my pocket (about the size of a lip gloss tube). But I'm kinda not the norm. A few band aids in my wallet finish up my inventory.

 
 
Anonymous Kristine dB Says:

Well, I would like to have a book, bottle of water, and something to munch on. But what I usually have .... If I'm carrying my purse I wouldn't have much - a little Gideon's Bible, some candy, lip gloss, lotion, sunglasses. But if I happened to have my bag with me (I am a student after all!), I would definitely have a book or two to add to the list from my purse. I'd also be able to do a lot of scribbling - have lots of scrap paper floating around!

 
 
Blogger Deborah Raney Says:

If I could choose, I'd take the stack of writing and decorating magazines I'm SO far behind on reading (does a stack of 20 magazines count as one thing?), a big bag of Reese's Pieces, and my lip gloss. : )

If I had to work with what's already in my purse, I'd have a whole year's supply of lip gloss, plenty of pens and notepads and an arsenal of personal hygiene supplies--hand lotion, hand sanitizer, mouthwash, eyedrops--oh, and that necessity of life, mascara. ; )

 
 
Anonymous BJ Says:

My iPod, whatever I'm reading at the time (right now it would be Dean Koontz's *Forever Odd*), and some Maelox (I tend to get nervous in elevators). Oh--can I bring my dog and cat, too, for entertainment?

BJ

 
 
Blogger Pam Kumpe Says:

If I knew - I'd take my digital recorder, batteries and a flashlight. The recorder is for listening to everyone tell tales or whine about life. The flashlight would be so I could check out which of my new friends had brought food.

If I had no idea - I have peppermint lip gloss and a Starbuck's gift card, not very filling.

 
 
Anonymous Anonymous Says:

planning ahead...Super Gulp size water bottle (ice stays longer),cd player with a couple of my burned music discs and a couple protein bars

if I had my school bag,then I'd have all the above as well as, 3 writing pens, post it notes,pack of gum, and my pocket knife with a screw driver,nail file,tweezers and
small scissors. oh and I always carry a couple band-aids with me since I'm accident prone. :-) (I once won the game where girls all have to dump out their pocketbook and find the most/unusual item...if you had to search my car,I'd win hands down!!) LOL

 
 
Anonymous Betsy Says:

I hope I'd have a book,gum,and pens.

 
 
Blogger Dianne Says:

I have my PDA so I could read or play a game, once I calmed down!

 

Add a Comment



Ready and Waiting for a New Year


Hanging on . . . only a few more days until we get a brand new year!

Dave Lambert (one of my editors, and for whom I would lay my cloak across ANY puddle) has a great piece on Charis today, so be sure to check it out.

C.J. asked what type of dog makes a cameo in THE ELEVATOR. At the moment, Sadie (to honor my late mastiff) is a golden retriever (to honor BJ Hoff's dearly departed doggie companion). I think she'll stay a golden, because a mastiff, my favorite breed, couldn't really accomplish some of the things Sadie does.

The story is coming together slowly--I'm trying to master the art of inserting backstory at the perfect place, in perfectly-sized pieces. Since all of Act II and most of Act III take place in an elevator car, I have to resort to technique to keep the action flowing smoothly . . .

Well, that's it. One observation--before Christmas, I sent a postcard to everyone on my mailing list about the 2006 releases. It's a little disconcerting to see how many have been returned to me--oh, I expect the usual from folks who have moved, but a large number of these are Christian bookstores that have simply gone out of business. That's sobering.

Angie
By Angela on Wednesday, December 28, 2005 @ 9:38 AM


for this post

 
Blogger C.J. Darlington Says:

You surprise me, Angie. I was almost certain it would be a mastiff! I smile when I read one of your books and a character has one (a mastiff) because I know they're your favorites. There's nothing like a good dog. I have four myself, and of course I managed to write one into my novel, too.

 
 
Anonymous Melissa Says:

Angie,
I'm on your mailing list but I moved last year. How or where can I update my mailing address?

 
 
Blogger Angela Says:

If you want to be on my mailing list, go to my web page and sign up in one of the "newsletter" boxes. Enter both your snail mail and email addys and you'll be on both the postcard and email newsletter lists. Thanks! Or do whichever one you prefer.

Angie

 
 
Blogger Sara Says:

I experience the same thing when I try to get different perspectives from Christian bookstores across the country for assignments I do for Christian Retailing Magazine. It's sad when you get several "this number has been disconnected." Makes you think and makes you remember just how important it is to support those Christian stores.

 
 
Anonymous Anonymous Says:

But you're not going to have a mastiff in the elevator, are ya? Wait! That sounds like terrific conflict!

: )

 

Add a Comment



Back to the Routine



Thank the good Lord, it's time to get back to work. Christmas was a lovely break, but I love ordinary life, too.

In fact . . . I was writing a friend about some, um, challenges that arose this Christmas, and she said, "Some people hope for a Norman Rockwell Christmas and end up with Salvador Dali." Ha! Steph Whitson Higgins, you couldn't have been more right. So if you have come through the holidays and found them less than picture-perfect, don't feel that you were alone. I couldn't help but think of some of my friends who were alone, away from home, dealing with family stresses, etc. When the rest of the world is celebrating and are positively enebriated with nostalgia and tradition, know that it's okay to be . . . where you are. God is faithful even in our less-than-perfectness. He is with us even when the Christmas bulbs are shattered and the house is far too quiet.

And He is with us in the ordinary routine. Back to those women in the elevator . . . happy to report that they are officially IN the elevator and we have passed the inciting incident and moved into Act II. On schedule.

Angie

By Angela on Tuesday, December 27, 2005 @ 6:03 AM


for this post

 
Blogger Pam Kumpe Says:

Angela, I purchased your comprehensive study from Glorieta on writing fiction. I discovered your skeleton diagram on your blog where you tell of these points and as I wanted to print it to go with my notes from the tapes - it's so small that when I print it off, it's about 1 inch tall. Do you have a larger copy and would you be willing to email it to me?

I wasn't sure how else to contact you, so here I am.

Thanks so much --

 
 
Blogger C.J. Darlington Says:

Yeah, there's nothing like getting back into your schedule. Holiday's are nice, but ...

Thanks for keeping us updated on The Elevator. I was really intrigued by your brief synopsis posted a bit ago. Looking forward to how the story progresses. And by the way, what type of dog makes a cameo?

 

Add a Comment



My version of the Am Ex ad . . .


My pal Robin Lee Hatcher (that's her pic) is procrastinating today. And though I'm not procrastinating (I'm clearing out all the Christmas decorations from inside the house--no, it's not too soon when you're on a deadline), I'll play along so SHE can procrastinate a little longer.

Robin Lee took a tip from those print Am Ex ads that are everywhere. So here's my bio, a la American Express:

My name ... Angela Elise Elwell Hunt
My childhood ambition ... to be a famous singer
My fondest memory ... the arrivals of my children via jet from South Korea
My soundtrack ... anything by Secret Garden
My retreat ... my office
My wildest dream ... (had to invent one) being on the NYT bestseller list
My proudest moment ... the first thing that pops into mind is hearing my friend Keri Christie Igney talk about what I was like in high school. I didn't remember being so . . . independent.
My biggest challenge ... parenting two twenty-somethings. The hardest stage yet.
My alarm clock ... like Robin, my body wakes me up. My internal alarm wakes me up with the sunrise.
My perfect day ... would be one with no appointments, no quota, no necessary chores--just lots of books to read.
My first job ... scooping ice cream for $1.00 an hour.
My indulgence ... fine perfumes. (Michael Kors. Ahhh!)
My last purchase ... a new grandfather clock. Ordered this morning. (Don't ask what happened to the old one.)
My favorite movie ... Ice Castles. (Favorite TV show: Alias.)
My inspiration ... nature
My life ... boot camp.
My favorite Christmas gift this year (I added this one): high top converse sneaks.
My card ... is Visa. Sorry, Am Ex.

If you want to play, leave a comment so I'll know where to read your bio.

Angie
By Angela on Monday, December 26, 2005 @ 2:50 PM


for this post

 
Blogger Kansas Bob Says:

Too tired to fill out a questionaire today but I am glad to see that someone else is an Alias fan. Happy 2006!

 
 
Blogger Carrie Says:

I'd never heard of Secret Garden before so I headed to Amazon an listened to some samples. Beautiful!

 
 
Blogger codepoke Says:

I'll probably spend all day wondering what happened to the old grandfather clock ;-)

 

Add a Comment



Trip over to Charis Connection


So I can clean up/recuperate from Christmas, I'm blogging at Charis Connection today (those articles are pre-written!)

http://charisconnection.blogspot.com.

Happy after-holidays!

Angie
By Angela on @ 8:40 AM


for this post



A Christmas Story


The Singing Shepherd


Whenever he was afraid, Jareb sang. Singing made him feel better.

But his singing made everyone else feel worse. Jareb’s singing was dreadful.

Jareb was a shepherd. He helped his older brothers Ariel, Samuel, and Simon tend their father’s sheep on the hillsides of Bethlehem. Jareb loved the calm, quiet sheep.

But a shepherd’s life can be frightening. Nights were filled with dark shadows and eerie noises. The rumble of thunder, the howls of jackals, and the hooting of owls caused Jareb to sing a lot.

Ariel and Samuel hated Jareb’s squeaky songs. “But the sheep like them,” Simon pointed out. “They know no wild animal would come near us while Jareb is yowling. Let him sing.”

So Jareb sang day and night. He even hummed in his sleep. His brothers stuffed wool in their ears.

One cool night the shepherds settled their flock and lay down to rest by the campfire. Ariel, Samuel, and Simon fell asleep. Jareb hummed off-key as his eyes grew heavy. The velvet darkness of night wrapped around him, and Jareb yawned.

Before he could close his mouth, the sky flashed brighter than a thousand campfires, and an angel stood right in front of Jareb. His clothes glowed with a blinding blue flame.

Terrified, Jareb tried to sing, but his mouth wouldn’t move. He heard his brothers gasp.

“Do not be afraid,” the visitor said. “I bring you good news of great joy for all people. This night a Savior has been born in Bethlehem. He is Christ the Lord.”

“Wh-wh-what?” Ariel asked. “A Savior?”

The shining man smiled at Ariel. “Here is a sign to help you find him. The baby will be wrapped in cloths and lying in a manger.” Immediately the whole sky blazed with light, and hundreds dazzling visitors filled the pasture and the hills. “Glory to God in the highest!” their voices rang through the night, “and on earth, peace to all people everywhere.”

The angels shone brighter and brighter until they seemed to melt into a burning sky. Jareb and his brothers shielded their eyes. Then, in an instant, all was as dark as before.

“This is wonderful!” Ariel jumped to his feet. “The Savior has come. Let’s go and find him!”

Samuel brushed grass from his clothes. “How many babies in a manger can there be?”

“The prophets said he’d come to Bethlehem,” Simon added, reaching for his sandals. “Can you believe an angel came to us?”

Jareb didn’t move. He began to sing.

“Come on, Jareb,” Samuel urged. “Are you afraid? Too afraid to find this Savior?”

Jareb hung his head. “I’d rather stay here with the sheep, that’s all.”

Ariel, Samuel, and Simon hurried to Bethlehem. Jareb stayed with the sheep and sang in the dark.

When they returned, Jareb’s brothers couldn’t stop talking. “You should have seen him,” Ariel said.

“You should not be such a coward, Jareb,” Simon added. “You were invited to see the Savior, too. If God can send angels to invite you, can’t He also give you a little courage?”

Jareb thought about the baby for many months. The more he thought, the more ashamed he felt. Why was he always afraid? Why did he spend all his time singing to silly sheep?

One evening after the sheep were settled, Jareb put on his cloak.

“Where are you going?” Samuel asked. “It will soon be dark.”

“I am going to find that baby,” Jareb answered. And off he went to Bethlehem, singing on the way.

Jareb had no idea how to find a child who had been born so many months before. He didn’t even know if the family still lived in the city. He asked God to guide his footsteps.

A rich caravan of men and camels crowded the road, and Jareb had to stop and wait for it to pass. Suddenly a young camel slipped away from the others and bolted straight toward Jareb.
“Quick! Stop that camel!”

Without thinking, Jareb caught the rope dangling from the animal’s neck.

“Thank you, young man,” the servant said, taking the camel from Jareb. “My masters would be angry if I lost their prized camel. Although--” the servant scratched his head-- “since we left the child’s house, my masters have not stopped smiling.”

“Oh?” Jareb asked, hardly daring to hope. “What child is that?”

The servant smiled at Jareb. “A child who will be a great king some day, my masters say. We have come a great distance to find him.”

Jareb’s heart beat faster. Could that child be the Savior?

It was very dark when Jareb found the house the servant had described. No lamplight flickered from the window, and Jareb thought everyone must be asleep. Suddenly the door opened and a bearded man looked up and down the street.

Jareb stepped forward. “Please, sir,” he said, “may I see the child?”

The man frowned. “Who sent you?”

Jareb felt his cheeks burn. “An angel . . . many months ago. But I was afraid to come.”

The man pulled Jareb inside. “I am Joseph,” he said. “This is my wife, Mary. And this is Jesus.”

In the starlight streaming through the window, Jareb saw a young woman holding a sleeping child. The woman smiled at Jareb.

Joseph spoke again. “An angel has warned me that Herod will send soldiers to kill all baby boys in Bethlehem. Mary and I must take Jesus away, but there may be soldiers at the city gate. You must help us.”

“Soldiers?” Jareb felt his knees begin to quiver. “Killing? Herod?”

Joseph put his hand on Jareb’s shoulder. “We must leave tonight. Will you help?”

Jareb thought a moment, then he pulled a rough shawl from his shoulder. “This is a sling for newborn lambs,” he explained. “With it I could carry Jesus. No one would expect me to be carrying a baby.”

Joseph smiled. “Your plan is good, my friend.” he said.

Joseph and Mary carefully placed Jesus in the sling.

“There is a well outside the city gate,” Jareb whispered. “I will meet you there.”

Mary and Joseph slipped out into the darkness. Jareb shifted the sling onto his shoulder and peered down the street. He could hear noise in the distance—screaming and the clash of swords.

Jareb prayed the baby wouldn’t begin to cry, then he set out for the city gate, humming as he walked.

At the gate, a rough guard stepped in front of Jareb and squinted down at him. “We are looking for babies,” he growled, “baby boys. What’s that you’re carrying?”

“Please, sir,” Jareb stammered. “I’m . . . I’m only a shepherd. This is a sling for carrying lambs.”

Jareb fingers began to tremble. He squeezed the strap of the sling. “I’m famous for my sheep songs. Just listen.”

He burst into song. Fear made his voice louder and scratchier and even more out of tune than usual. The guard shuddered and covered his ears. “Arrgh!” he shouted. “Away with you, shepherd. Stop that awful racket!”

Outside the city, Joseph and Mary were waiting by the well. Jareb lifted Jesus from the sling and placed the child in Mary’s arms.

“Here’s your little lamb.” He laughed. “Look at how he smiles at the world’s worst singer!”

“You are a brave young man.” Mary smiled with tears in her eyes. “And your voice is a blessing from God.”

Jareb watched until the small family disappeared on the road, then he turned to the fields where his sheep waited.

The night had filled with dark shadows. Calls of owls and jackals echoed through the hills, but

Jareb didn’t notice. He began to sing—not because he was afraid, but because he had been brave. He had helped the Savior.

As he walked, his singing grew louder and stronger. The fearsome noises of the night vanished as owls and jackals fled to distant hills.

The only sound the waiting sheep heard that night was Jareb’s happy song.

(c) 1990, by Angela Hunt.

May the Lord use all our frailties to honor Him. A blessed Christmas to you and yours!

--Angie
By Angela on Saturday, December 24, 2005 @ 4:38 AM


for this post

 
Anonymous Betsy Says:

That was beautiful

 

Add a Comment



12 Writing Tips I Wish I'd Known . . . before I started writing

What will you find under my Christmas tree? A dozen tricks for better writing, no matter what you're writing.

#1: Check your dialog for explanations. Look for times when you've TOLD us your character is experiencing an emotion. In my writing yesterday, I found a place where I had written:

"What's wrong?" she asked, confused.

Oops. We don't need the writer (me) to tell the reader that the character's confused. It's much better just to ask, "What's wrong?" And if it's clear who's speaking, we don't even need the "she asked."

#2: Eliminate every -ly adverb in your speaker attributions.
One day I also found where I"d written:

"No slaver holder is ever going to sit at my table," said Mrs. Haynes emphatically.

Groan. Two big no-nos. First, the "said Mrs. Haynes" is old-fashioned, it should be turned around. "Mrs. Haynes said" is much better. And since this conversation is taking place at a dining room table where more than two people are present, we do need the speaker attribution. But the adverb "emphatically" has to go. I need to SHOW the reader that she was being emphatic, not just TELL them. So--I looked at the dialogue. It SOUNDS pretty emphatic by itself, and that's good. But if I want to further visualize the scene, I can do it. My finished sentence?

"No slaver is ever going to sit at my table." Mrs. Haynes unfolded her napkin with an emphatic snap. "You can be assured of that, Son."

# 3: Don't make your speaker attributions be physical impossibilities.

Never have be guilty of the following: "Yada, yada, yada," she smiled.

Characters can't speak and snarl, grimace, shrug, etc. A simple "said" is usually just fine. Editors have told me this is the FIRST mark of an amateur.

# 4: Get rid of speaker attributions entirely as long as it's clear who's speaking.

# 5: Don't begin a paragraph with the speaker attribution: Henry said, "It's time to get started." Much better to begin the paragraph:

"It's time to get started," Henry said, leaning toward me with a leer.

BETTER YET: Henry leaned toward me with a leer. "It's time to get started."

#6: Don't refer to a character more than one way in the same scene. If it's Mr. Jumbles at the beginning of the scene, don't call him "Howie" (in your speaker attributions) at the end of the scene. Another character can call him Howie, though.

# 7: Punctuation: Use ellipses to indicate gaps in conversation, or a character trailing off into thought. Use em dashes (dash dash or the looooong dash) to indicate that a character has been interrupted.

Ellipsis: "Oh, I don't know. I was a pretty thing, once . . . " Harriet's eyes closed with the memory.
Em Dash: "We'll just see about that! If you think I'm gonna--"
"Just shut up, will you, Hank? I'm sick of your bellyachin'."

# 8: Don't forget to paragraph your dialogue--a new paragraph for each speaker.
KEY THOUGHT: If your dialogue doesn't work once you've cut adverbs and emotional explanations (remember--emotions are okay as long as you're showing and not telling in your speaker attributions), you need to strengthen your dialogue. Let the characters' WORDS show the emotion. You, the writer, shouldn't have to explain everything.

Had enough? Hold on, there's more:

# 9: Read your dialogue out loud. Most dialogue is too formal (Unless you're writing about formal people in a bygone era.) If you're tempted to "loosen up" your dialogue after you read it aloud, give into the temptation.

# 10: Real people use contractions, they contradict each other, they use run on sentences. Go to it, with discretion.

# 11 (And this is a pet peeve of mine): Don't use exposition in your dialogue if the characters have no real reason to share it. I read a thriller the other day, and a guy was saying, "Yes, Tom, I know we're marooned on this island that's about 24 square miles with only two access roads." Enough already! Didn't Tom know where they were?

# 12: Don't write "on the nose." Don't let every conversational ping be answered by a corresponding pong. Example: (forgive my lack of paragraphing, but I'm trying to conserve space.) This isn't brilliant prose, but I trust you get the idea.

"Susie's having a baby." "Boy or girl?" "She doesn't know. Doesn't want to know." "I'd want to know, wouldn't you?"

That's blah. Try it like this: "Susie's having a baby." "Boy or girl?" "She doesn't know. Doesn't want to know." "I'm over her, really. "

Ah . . . now that's an interesting wrinkle. :-)

Angie

By Angela on Friday, December 23, 2005 @ 8:38 AM


for this post

 
Anonymous Ane Mulligan Says:

Great tips for dialogue. As a playwright, I really hate to see still, unnatural dialogue in novels. When I turned my hand to novels, I now read all my dialogue out loud, and even better, I have my hubby or a good friend read it for me.

 
 
Blogger Carrie Says:

Thanks for the tips! Merry Christmas.

 
 
Blogger Lynette Sowell Says:

One of my new favorite writing books is "Dialogue: Techniques and Exercises for Crafting Effective Dialogue" by Gloria Kempton (from the Write Great Fiction series). This post goes right along with her book. Thanks for sharing!

 

Add a Comment



The next time I say something dumb . . . I'll feel right at home with these folks.


"Whenever I watch TV and see those poor starving kids all over the world, I can't help but cry. I mean I'd love to be skinny like that, but not with all those flies and death and stuff." --Mariah Carey

"Smoking kills. If you're killed, you've lost a very important part of your life,"--Brooke Shields, during an interview to become Spokesperson for federal anti-smoking campaign.

"I've never had major knee surgery on any other part of my body," --Winston Bennett, University of Kentucky basketball forward.

"Outside of the killings, Washington has one of the lowest crime rates in the country."--Mayor Marion Barry, Washington, DC

"That lowdown scoundrel deserves to be kicked to death by a jackass, and I'm just the one to do it."--A congressional candidate in Texas

"Half this game is ninety percent mental."--Philadelphia Phillies manager, Danny Ozark

"It isn't pollution that's harming the environment. It's the impurities in our air and water that are doing it."--Al Gore, Vice President and "We are ready for an unforeseen event that may or may not occur."--Al Gore

"I love California. I practically grew up in Phoenix."--Dan Quayle

"We've got to pause and ask ourselves: How much clean air do we need?"--Lee Iacocca

"The word "genius" isn't applicable in football. A genius is a guy like Norman Einstein." --Joe Theisman, NFL football quarterback & sports analyst

"We don't necessarily discriminate. We simply exclude certain types of people." --Colonel Gerald Wellman, ROTC Instructor

"Traditionally, most of Australia's imports come from overseas."--Keppel Enderbery

"If somebody has a bad heart, they can plug this jack in at night as they go to bed and it will monitor their heart throughout the night. And the next morning, when they wake up dead, there'll be a record."--Mark S. Fowler, FCC Chairman

Nicole Ritchie on her book THE TRUTH ABOUT DIAMONDS: "I'm hoping that - that people will just act like adults and take it for what it is. And it's a story. It's a fiction novel."

And finally . . .

"Your food stamps will be stopped effective March 1992 because we received notice that you passed away. May God bless you. You may reapply if there is a change in your circumstances."--Department of Social Services, Greenville South Carolina
By Angela on Thursday, December 22, 2005 @ 10:52 AM


for this post



NEWS FLASH! They're here!

My beloved Charlie Gansky (wearing his Christmas holly and with his security blanket) checks out the new books. The Novelist and The Truth Teller have just arrived!
By Angela on Wednesday, December 21, 2005 @ 1:05 PM


for this post

 
Anonymous BJ Says:

What a handsome boy! And he's ready to snuggle up with a good read for Christmas!

I love this dog.

BJ

 
 
Blogger C.J. Darlington Says:

Congrats, Angie! Nothing like holding that finished book in your hands, is there?

 
 
Anonymous Anonymous Says:

Must read the new book! They get better and better you know... Comment on an older book, The Canopy, saw this website on Kim Komando and thought you might find it interesting. About folding proteins

folding.stanford.edu

 

Add a Comment



Lessons from Long Ago



Yesterday was my birthday, so I am happy to report that I am officially halfway to 96! I remember three years ago announcing that I was halfway to ninety, so it hardly seems fair that I'm progressing twice as fast as I should be. (And if that sentence makes sense to you, then you, like me, do not speak Numbers as a first language.)

To prevent this blog from being totally inane on (most) days when I don't have anything profound to say, I've been digging through some old emails. I found one from five years ago that is incredibly personal--I sent it to a close circle of female writer friends--but upon reading it again, I think maybe it will speak to someone else. I wrote this in 1997, when one of my books was nominated for the RITA (romance writers) award. The rest is self-explanatory:

Dear Sisters:

I'm going to be very honest now, okay? The Lord's been working on my heart, and I just feel led to share this with you all.

This year I went into the RITA gig with high hopes. I had been told by many people that my book was sort of the odds-on favorite (not to disparage the other two books, which are wonderful, but simply because mine had more "romance" in it.) I'm sure folks were telling the other two finalists that theirs were the favorites, too.

Anyway, I made a crucial error--I listened.

If you had asked me before Saturday night if I had expected to win, I'd have said no, but in truth, when the hour was done and I didn't win, I realized that I had really hoped to win. And that fact caught me by surprise, as did the disappointment I felt.

Now, disappointment and I aren't really on a first name basis. One of my guiding philosophies in life has always been, "if you don't expect much, you won't be disappointed," so I've always looked at good things as blessings and ordinary things as sort of my lot in life. (Being a youth pastor's wife keeps Ordinary real close.)

But later that night, when several of you comforted me, I was flabbergasted by the tide of hot emotion that swept through me--and kept on sweeping through. I was as surprised by my reaction as by anything else. My brain kept saying, "This is no big deal, Angie, not winning doesn't mean you can't write, it doesn't invalidate your work, and you are secure in Jesus," but my heart was broken. For a while there, I'll be honest, my spirit was broken, too. Wanted to hang it all up and go make pottery somewhere. (Isn't that crazy? I KNOW it's irrational.) But we women are about emotion, aren't we? And now I know how to write disappointment!

But today the Lord gave me a lesson through Oswald Chambers, and I think that this entire experience has been a blessing in disguise. God is teaching me.

Here's the lesson. My buddy Oswald writes: "The essential thing is my personal relationship to Jesus Christ--'That I may know him.' To fulfill God's design means entire abandonment to Him. Whenever I want things for myself, the relationship is distorted. It will be a big humiliation to realize that I have not been concerned about realizing Jesus Christ but only about realizing what He has done for me."

Don't we sing about "what he's done for me?" And though he has done marvelous things in saving, keeping, and sanctifying us, I have to wonder if I'm still looking for him to do for me, when I ought to be checking to see if I am content to be sold out to him.

My goal is God Himself, not joy nor peace, Nor even blessing, but Himself, my God.

Oswald hit me with this one final phrase: "Am I building up the body of Christ, or am I looking for my own personal development only?"

Convicting . . . and comforting.

Thanks, ladies, for listening.

Angie

By Angela on @ 6:39 AM


for this post

 
Blogger Accidental Poet Says:

That's the trick, isn't it - putting self aside. Thanks for sharing.

And the numbers made perfect sense to me :)

 
 
Anonymous Anonymous Says:

I have been looking for sites like this for a long time. Thank you!
» »

 

Add a Comment



What Is Good Writing?


On my little soapbox again . . .

Someone asked me, "What Is Good Writing?"

So I'll offer my opinion. First, I have to refer to my high school English teacher, who insisted upon giving us TWO grades for every writing assignment: one for technique, one for content. (I did the same thing when I taught English.)

Content translates into the story, which includes the element of emotional contact. Technique, on the other hand, pertains to how well the writer exercises his craft. Too many technique errors draw the reader's attention away from the content and diminish the enjoyment of the story. Too little story . . . well, I won't read the book long enough to notice good technique.

The value of content, or the story's quality, is almost entirely subjective.

Most "academic" or "literary" novels don't excite my enthusiasm. I prefer stories that follow the mythical pattern--an interesting, active protagonist strives to reach a goal, overcomes complications, learns a lesson, sacrifices something in the effort, and comes out either a winner or a loser, but always wiser for the effort and changed by the struggle. If I can identify with the protagonist, so much the better. If his world is fascinating, even better.

If I, the reader, learn something, better yet. If the novel makes me think and question my previously held suppositions, wonderful. And if a writer can do all of the above in his/her story, that's EXCELLENT storytelling.

What's good technique? Crisp, clear, precise writing. Using the exactly right word, and not a word more or less. Oblique dialogue. Clear interior dialogue uncluttered by "she thought" and "he wondered." Strong verbs and nouns that obviate the need for redundant adjectives and adverbs.

Exposition that flows naturally when I need it, not a moment before or after, and definitely not in dialogue between people who would already know the information. I am peeved by the following words IF they catch my attention: that, was, were, it, suddenly. I also like clear point of view, limited to one person per scene, because I'm a child of the video age and accustomed to thinking like a camera.

But when all is said and done, the most beautiful prose in the world won't matter one whit if I don't care A LOT about the characters by the second chapter . . . some would say the second page. And a gripping story will make me forgive--even not notice--all kinds of technique problems. But I'll confess--when I pick up a book and flip through the pages, it's the technique problems that catch my eye.

Rule number one: good writing captivates the reader with story and sympathetic characters.
Rule number two: good writing is technique that functions like a smooth highway. It paves the way so the story can flow without distracting the reader.

Very simple.

Angie
By Angela on Tuesday, December 20, 2005 @ 8:34 PM


for this post

 
Blogger Leslie Says:

I recently read the Awakening, and last night I read The Note. Both novels evoked drastically different yet strong emotions for me. I actually burst into tears after reading the first chapter of The Note (my main spiritual gift is showing mercy/compassion, so I probably don't need to explain why.) I didn't even realize you were the writer of the Awakening until I visited your website a few moments ago.

You are correct-if I hadn't cared for the characters within the first chapter-and promptly burst into tears-I would not have stayed up last night so that I could finish The Note.

My little comment is two fold-To thank you for writing such a wonderfully crafted book in The Note, but also to say that I agree with you on what you consider "good writing"

May God continue to bless your creativeness.
~Leslie

 
 
Blogger Rachel Hauck Says:

Thanks for this post, Angie, it's very encouraging.

Rachel Hauck

 

Add a Comment



Actual Analogies and Metaphors Found in High School Essays


LOL! I just finished my six pages, so I'm in the mood for a little silliness. You may have seen these, but they're too good not to repeat. Actual analogies and metaphors from high school essays . . . and I tell you, there are days when I've composed some that could compete with these! Enjoy!

1. Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had its two sides gently compressed by a Thigh Master.

2. His thoughts tumbled in his head, making and breaking alliances like underpants in a dryer without Cling Free.

3. He spoke with the wisdom that can only come from experience, like a guy who went blind because he looked at a solar eclipse without one of those boxes with a pinhole in it and now goes around the country speaking at high schools about the dangers of looking at a solar eclipse without one of those boxes with a pinhole in it.

4. She grew on him like she was a colony of E. coli and he was room-temperature Canadian beef.

5. She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like that sound a dog makes just before it throws up.

6. Her vocabulary was as bad as, like, whatever.

7. He was as tall as a six-foot-three-inch tree.

8. The revelation that his marriage of 30 years had disintegrated because of his wife's infidelity came as a rude shock, like a surcharge at a formerly surcharge-free ATM.

9. The little boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn't.

10. McBride fell 12 stories, hitting the pavement like a Hefty bag filled with vegetable soup.

11. From the attic came an unearthly howl. The whole scene had an eerie, surreal quality, like when you're on vacation in another city and Jeopardy comes on at 7:00 p.m. instead of 7:30.

12. Her hair glistened in the rain like a nose hair after a sneeze.

13. The hailstones leaped from the pavement, just like maggots when you fry them in hot grease.

14. Long separated by cruel fate, the star-crossed lovers raced across the grassy field toward each other like two freight trains, one having left Cleveland at 6:36 p.m. traveling at 55 mph, the other from Topeka at 4:19 p.m. at a speed of 35 mph.

15. They lived in a typical suburban neighborhood with picket fences that resembled Nancy Kerrigan's teeth.

16. John and Mary had never met. They were like two hummingbirds who had also never met.

17. He fell for her like his heart was a mob informant and she was the East River.

18. Even in his last years, Grandpappy had a mind like a steel trap only one that had been left out so long, it had rusted shut.

19. Shots rang out, as shots are known to do.

20. The plan was simple, like my brother-in-law Phil. But unlike Phil, this plan just might work.

21. The young fighter had a hungry look, the kind you get from not eating for a while.

22. He was as lame as a duck. Not the metaphorical lame duck, either, but a real duck that was actually lame. Maybe from stepping on a land mine or something.

23. The ballerina rose gracefully en pointe and extended one slender leg behind her, like a dog at a fire hydrant.

24. It was an American tradition, like fathers chasing kids around with power tools.

25. He was deeply in love. When she spoke, he thought he heard bells, as if she were a garbage truck backing up.

Angie
By Angela on Monday, December 19, 2005 @ 7:48 PM


for this post

 
Blogger C.J. Darlington Says:

5. She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like the sound a dog makes just before it throws up.

Nothing like that sound!

 
 
Blogger Carrie Says:

I particularly like the graceful ballerina who looks like a dog about to pee on a fire hydrant!

 

Add a Comment



Chapter a Week


ChapteraWeek-subscribe@yahoogroups.com

That's where you send an email if you want to receive a weekly chapter of the best Christian fiction around. It's a free service that's guaranteed to keep you doin' the Snoopy dance.

Just wanted to be sure you knew about this service. Enjoy!

Angie
By Angela on Sunday, December 18, 2005 @ 6:58 PM


for this post

 
Blogger Avik Says:

May Peace
Hope and Love
be with you
Today
Tomorrow
and Always

Merry Christmas!
The Surging Waves

 

Add a Comment



The TRUTH TELLER is shipping now


Speaking of ALIAS reminds me that THE TRUTH TELLER is now shipping to bookstores across the fruited plain. This book originally came out years ago, and it's special to me because it's the first time I ever wrote what I wanted to write, as opposed to what I thought the market wanted.

I got the idea, as usual, from a number of sources. The first was the OJ Simson trial. I got so sick of seeing it on TV and reading about it everywhere that I found myself wishing for some kind of human truth detector--someone who could walk into that courtroom, point at people and tell us once and for all who was lying and who wasn't.

Then I began to wonder--well, where would such a person come from? Why would he have this ability which the average person lacked?

And then I read about the Iceman, the 5300-year-old fellow they found frozen in the Italian Alps. The man was remarkably well-preserved.

And then I thought, Well . . . since the law of entrophy declares that all things break down, this man is not as "broken down" as everyone else. Which means his DNA is in far better shape. Which means that if someone had a child with his DNA, that kid might have some unique abilities . . .

And so the kernel that became THE TRUTH TELLER was formed. The story is about a young woman, Lara Godfrey, who, after losing her husband to cancer, decides to have her husband's child (he's made a sperm donation that's being held at a cyrogenic storage facility). So she has the in vitro fertilization, though she doesn't know that an evil scientist/philosopher has tinkered with the sperm's DNA and plans to take the resulting child . . .

Sounds like an Alias plot, doesn't it? The villain's name is even Devin Sloane! (Alias's principal bad guy is Arvin Sloane. I tell you, ideas are in the ether . . .)

In any case, the book has been reissued and will be appearing in bookstores any day now. Enjoy!

Angie
By Angela on Saturday, December 17, 2005 @ 9:35 AM


for this post

 
Blogger Accidental Poet Says:

YES! The marvelous gift you have for "What if...?"

Can't wait to read it. Although I seem to be on a one-woman quest to read all Christian fiction out there now ...

 

Add a Comment



The Excel Chart Timeline


The other day Louise asked a question . . . and since it's almost lunchtime and too soon to jump into the WIP only to stop for pizza, I thought I'd take a moment to answer it.

Louise was in my fiction track at Glorieta. There I demonstrated how I use a standard EXCEL worksheet to keep track of details in my work-in-progress.

The rows, of course, are assigned to scenes. The columns are these (though you can pick and choose and do what you like):

Chapter number (last thing assigned)
POV character (I like to color code these with "fill color" so I can see how many POVs per character at a glance)
Date/time
Place
Action (abbreviated)
Mood
Others present
Dramatic ? raised
Dramatic ? answered
Weather

The dramatic question asked and answered is something I've begun to worker harder on . . . the object, of course, is to delay the answer for as long as possible, thus keeping your reader in suspense. Simple.

Enjoy this great tool, and my hat's off to Al Gansky, who convinced me to dump my Writer's Blocks in favor of this method.

Angie
By Angela on Friday, December 16, 2005 @ 11:41 AM


for this post



Create a Caption

I so enjoyed reading your captions for the body-in-the-grass photo that I thought I'd give you another chance--create a caption for THIS photo, if you will!

(Wish I'd had this picture when I was blogging about bodily functions in fiction.)


Your regularly-scheduled blog for this space is appearing at "Charis Connection" today (Friday). See you there!

Angie
By Angela on @ 8:35 AM


for this post

 
Anonymous Anonymous Says:

"Uhh ... can we have a clean-up on aisle 3?"

donna, who is defying Blogger's attempt to sign me up.

: )

 
 
Blogger michael snyder Says:

Caution: Dual Stream Urinator Crossing!

 
 
Anonymous Melissa Says:

"Ahhhhh...the simple joys of life"
if anyone has visited a foreign country...eg., South Korea it was a new and interesting experience to see people stopping at the nearest curb and doing their duty without a blink of they eye. When driving along the major freeway and traffic stopped and nature calls...well...ya know,there ya are.

 

Add a Comment



Alias takes a Hiatus. Wish I could.



Last night I dreamed that Sydney and Nadia were fraternal twins separated at birth. (And this will only make sense if you watch ALIAS.) Oh, I know there are problems with that scenario, but someone in my dream fugue it made perfect sense. Because I so want Nadia to be Jack's daughter, not the evil Sloane's. (Though it is possible to have twins fathered by two different men, that seems far-fetched even for Irinia.)

This is what comes of watching ALIAS right before bed. And now the show takes a hiatus for Jennifer G. Affleck to enjoy her new baby.

If only I dreamed of my characters as easily as I dream of Jack and Syd, Vaughn, and Irina. But I will. There are times, when I'm deep into a project, that I dream-edit pages--I read text and strike words out and start over again. I only wish I could wake up with finished pages on the nightstand.

But I'm here to report that the six-page-per day routine is working very well, and for the first time I feel like I'm getting my footing in this project. Deadline is April first and I have many travel days between now and then, so I have to keep pushing on.

No hiatus for me. And I don't suppose Nadia and Sydney could be twins . . . Jack would have noticed. (VBG)

Angie
By Angela on Thursday, December 15, 2005 @