tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post3891893610637670832..comments2023-12-31T09:17:15.628-05:00Comments on A Life in Pages: Friday the 13thAngelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15745389922246602752noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-8563850966485883142007-04-14T17:33:00.000-04:002007-04-14T17:33:00.000-04:00Will and I were married on the 13th of February, A...Will and I were married on the 13th of February, Ange. And still trippin' along after 19 years.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-75294362412732260152007-04-13T21:21:00.000-04:002007-04-13T21:21:00.000-04:00Angie--Now there's a first sentence that got my at...Angie--Now there's a first sentence that got my attention! Fifty years ago, in freshman anatomy, the cadavers were all a leathery brown color, but that wouldn't be nearly so colorful an opening.<BR/>Great post. Congratulations on having the monkey of a completed manuscript off your back.<BR/>Now back to lurking in the shadows.Richard L. Mabry, MDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16251750407920101073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-16623725625367866652007-04-13T20:00:00.000-04:002007-04-13T20:00:00.000-04:00And I loved your first first sentence! Ah well, ev...And I loved your first first sentence! Ah well, everyone has their opinions, and you are the author, after all - all power belongs to you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-50155787147584413192007-04-13T18:08:00.000-04:002007-04-13T18:08:00.000-04:00My grandparents were married on a Friday the 13th,...My grandparents were married on a Friday the 13th, and celebrated every single one.Lesliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05648816340111618869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-6231268751687915242007-04-13T16:03:00.000-04:002007-04-13T16:03:00.000-04:00I was just so-so on the other first paragraph. I ...I was just so-so on the other first paragraph. I really like this one. Good call, I say.Kay Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14915323487092648396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-19391006753845958102007-04-13T15:42:00.000-04:002007-04-13T15:42:00.000-04:00Oh yeah. Interesting first paragraph. That's so ...Oh yeah. Interesting first paragraph. That's so cool that you listen to your blog readers' feedback. Can't wait for this series to come out! As far as forgetting what I've read, with my memory, that will be no problem. :) Have a wonderful Sabbath rest!Danahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13234593835112701592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-87113529101823280232007-04-13T15:11:00.000-04:002007-04-13T15:11:00.000-04:00Speaking of spoilers - there was a mega spoiler fo...Speaking of spoilers - there was a mega spoiler for The Elevator on this blog because those of us who read this blog knew ...oh wait, I don't want to spoil anyone else! <BR/><BR/>Elevator - great read, escalating beautifully at the end. With a few surprises despite the blog-reading :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-81834264464163194642007-04-13T14:35:00.000-04:002007-04-13T14:35:00.000-04:00I just looked at some of the other comments on the...I just looked at some of the other comments on the first chapter (for some reason, they're not showing up in my inbox.) <BR/><BR/>The tricky part for me was giving the reader information that happened in the first book without indulging in backstory--which, as you know, goes against my personal credo, which won't let me use bs until after the first thirty pages. :-) (That was Back Story, BTW). <BR/><BR/>The only trouble is that I've introduced a bit of a spoiler for those of you who read my blog. I'm trusting that you will forget everything you've read by the time the first book comes out--in October. <BR/><BR/>Muchas gracias! <BR/><BR/>AngieAngelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15745389922246602752noreply@blogger.com