tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post7333260507071299915..comments2023-12-31T09:17:15.628-05:00Comments on A Life in Pages: The WIP sample, Part 2Angelahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15745389922246602752noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-16056388435452224292008-06-11T17:59:00.000-04:002008-06-11T17:59:00.000-04:00Mocha with Linda~~too funny! But, if we choose to...Mocha with Linda~~too funny! But, if we choose to read, aren't we really torturing ourselves? hmmmmm. At any rate, I'm sure Angie is chuckling from time to time :-)Jackie Colburnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06988607818516034838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-70348468854075424252008-06-11T17:04:00.000-04:002008-06-11T17:04:00.000-04:00Accidental Poet spoke my hunch. I suspect the law...Accidental Poet spoke my hunch. I suspect the lawyer is "she."<BR/><BR/>And I also suspect Angie is laughing at all of us.! <BR/><BR/>Her publisher may not let her torture characters in her novels, but she has no problem torturing the readers of her blog! :-)Mocha with Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16387717261200678465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-10055552241190787222008-06-11T15:27:00.000-04:002008-06-11T15:27:00.000-04:00hmmmmm......I need more!hmmmmm......I need more!sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16558961544260341038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-17484503530477481082008-06-11T14:00:00.000-04:002008-06-11T14:00:00.000-04:00Maybe Briley is the murderess ...Maybe Briley is the murderess ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-40187724712327855952008-06-11T13:12:00.000-04:002008-06-11T13:12:00.000-04:00Very interesting... I wonder how the different cha...Very interesting... I wonder how the different characters relate to each other. Can't wait for more!<BR/>~Crystal M.Crystal M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09278486194660608063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-83301219960628690282008-06-11T12:32:00.000-04:002008-06-11T12:32:00.000-04:00ok...my mind is used to reading past tense with no...ok...my mind is used to reading past tense with novels. I'm seeing a lot of present active. How is that going to work overall?Jackie Colburnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06988607818516034838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-37390670878672156222008-06-11T11:57:00.000-04:002008-06-11T11:57:00.000-04:00Oooooooooooooo - it's possible that the dear littl...Oooooooooooooo - it's possible that the dear little murderer has already been in Briley's office? You people are GOOD! ClydeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-51076106501862178522008-06-11T11:47:00.000-04:002008-06-11T11:47:00.000-04:00I just caught on that "she" has no name in the fir...I just caught on that "she" has no name in the first chapter...<BR/>It could be anyone.... At least from what I've read so far.<BR/><BR/>Can't wait for more!Kay Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14915323487092648396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-9033798246357962172008-06-11T11:46:00.000-04:002008-06-11T11:46:00.000-04:00Now you're really messing with us! We never learne...Now you're really messing with us! We never learned "her" name yesterday, although I have a hunch.<BR/><BR/>I'm completely intrigued - and I'm not just being kind!<BR/><BR/>BTW...needles/syringes are indeed sharps, but the term "sharps" encompasses anything that can/does penetrate the skin: needles, lancets, scalpels, vials and ampules, the tubes they collect your blood in, etc. All sorts of things go into those big red boxes at the MD office/hospital, and it's simpler to call them an all-inclusive term. Patients learn the lingo from their nurses! (And there are rules about disposal for home use.)Mocha with Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16387717261200678465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-66444622537356632362008-06-11T11:42:00.001-04:002008-06-11T11:42:00.001-04:00Love this line and I hope to live it: “We do not ...Love this line and I hope to live it: “We do not always have to insist upon justice—sometimes we are given the opportunity to exhibit mercy.”Doni Brinkmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18042422099609493402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13498449.post-70042204553909442772008-06-11T11:42:00.000-04:002008-06-11T11:42:00.000-04:00Great dialogue and I like Briley very much. Am try...Great dialogue and I like Briley very much. Am trying to figure out how this new set of characters will interface with the loving wife we met yesterday. Supposing "wifey" will be needing a lawyer sometime soon? Briley will be ready for a criminal case when our little murderer walks through her door? OK, I'm staying tuned! ClydeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com